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"I-...I thought everyone was born with a heart..."
Poor thing
Even though this is a sloppy piece, it kinda almost brought me to tears while plotting this guy's past...(( When I make my characters, I actually think of how they feel when this stuff happens. So dont think im weird XD)
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His family never loved him. Riot was the runt of the litter.
Running off one day (not running away from home), he met a lone wolf by the name of Apocalypse. This may sound weird, but it was a sorta " friendship at first sight " sorta thing. Riot told Apocalypse about all the negative things his family does, and how he hates it back home, but Apocalypse told him that everyone was born with a heart, and his whole family loves him. Riot refused to believe something of those words, however. Apocalypse still pitied the child, but didnt have an idea of how to help him... Until...
Apocalypse followed Riot home one night, and murdered the whole pack.
When Riot woke up and saw the bloody mess, he was automatically brought to tears. Fear overcame his body when he looked up to see his best friend had his mother's bloody corpse in his mouth with her neck slit open.
"Wha-...WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!?", Riot yelled.
Apocalypse stared at Riot.
"See? You did love them... Not a single tear would be coming down your face if you hated your family."
Apocalypse threw Riot's mother's body out of his mouth and lowered his head to Riot's.
"I'm...Sorry."
And Apocalypse ran off.
Riot stood in silence, and the tears stopped coming out of his eyes.
"I...Thought everyone was born with a heart...", he whispered.
Riot shook his head and closed his eyes tightly.
--
Here is Riot older --->
THAT IS NOT APOCALYPSE IN THAT DRAWING. He meets that wolf later.
Art/Character(s) [c] Me
EDIT!! OMG I FORGOT TO MENTION...
To obtain a demon of Shiinrai, you must have a brutal past. The more brutal, the stronger your demon is. Riot has a red eye in the other pic of him because he already obtained a demon from this incident. He doesnt have one red eye now because he is experiencing that required "brutal past" at that moment.
Its a secret who his demon is.
Poor thing
Even though this is a sloppy piece, it kinda almost brought me to tears while plotting this guy's past...(( When I make my characters, I actually think of how they feel when this stuff happens. So dont think im weird XD)
--
His family never loved him. Riot was the runt of the litter.
Running off one day (not running away from home), he met a lone wolf by the name of Apocalypse. This may sound weird, but it was a sorta " friendship at first sight " sorta thing. Riot told Apocalypse about all the negative things his family does, and how he hates it back home, but Apocalypse told him that everyone was born with a heart, and his whole family loves him. Riot refused to believe something of those words, however. Apocalypse still pitied the child, but didnt have an idea of how to help him... Until...
Apocalypse followed Riot home one night, and murdered the whole pack.
When Riot woke up and saw the bloody mess, he was automatically brought to tears. Fear overcame his body when he looked up to see his best friend had his mother's bloody corpse in his mouth with her neck slit open.
"Wha-...WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!?", Riot yelled.
Apocalypse stared at Riot.
"See? You did love them... Not a single tear would be coming down your face if you hated your family."
Apocalypse threw Riot's mother's body out of his mouth and lowered his head to Riot's.
"I'm...Sorry."
And Apocalypse ran off.
Riot stood in silence, and the tears stopped coming out of his eyes.
"I...Thought everyone was born with a heart...", he whispered.
Riot shook his head and closed his eyes tightly.
--
Here is Riot older --->
THAT IS NOT APOCALYPSE IN THAT DRAWING. He meets that wolf later.
Art/Character(s) [c] Me
EDIT!! OMG I FORGOT TO MENTION...
To obtain a demon of Shiinrai, you must have a brutal past. The more brutal, the stronger your demon is. Riot has a red eye in the other pic of him because he already obtained a demon from this incident. He doesnt have one red eye now because he is experiencing that required "brutal past" at that moment.
Its a secret who his demon is.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactWow! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="18" height="17" alt="
" title="I think I've fainted."/> Just wow! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="23" height="15" alt="
" title="Wow!"/>I love this! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Th expression makes me want to squee! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="37" height="25" alt="
" title=""/> I love the choice of colours on this one, very well chosen! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="Nod"/> I'm gonna do this critique different:Backstory:
I was literally blown off my chair with epic story wind! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="XD"/> I just admire how well your stories sit in with the picture, deffinatley worth being a book, I'd certainly read it! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="LOL"/> I love at the end where Apocalypse says, "See? You did love them...Not a single tear would be coming down your face if you hated your faimly." So painfully true! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt="
" title="La la la la"/>Texture:
I adore the fluffiness of his fur, how well it all fits in! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> I's truly astonishing how with just the tips of his fur being a lighter colour, you can tell that the moon is shining down on the ground. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Razz)"/>Expression:
He looks so sad and so heart-broken, I wish I could scoop him up in my arms and squeeze him until he pops! (not literally) <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="21" alt="
" title="Laughing my ass off!"/>Overall I really like this alot, and with the story, it makes it one well-desereved, 4.5 <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt="
" title="Star!"/> piece! <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/g/r/g…" alt="
" title="grin--plz"/>